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Hello. My name is Ayaka Kimura. I from Japan in Kumamoto. Kumamoto has a big castle and a famous park. The castle's name is Kumamoto castle. The park is Suizenji park. Kumamoto castle was built by Katou Kiyomasa. I want go it. You will really be taken with it. Why don't you go to Suizenjipark. So I don't introduce it. Sorry. Do you have pet? I have a dog. Her name is Sakura. She is a naughty dog. She waster time every day, but I like her. She is my best friend. My family consists of my father and my mother and me and my dog. I am an only child. My father wark is waerhouse company. Fish and food and wine...anything. My mother wark is an office worker. They are busy. What are your wark? How many do you have in your family? What do you like? I like clean my house, because my mother is very every day. I am cleaning my house in my free time, so now my home is beautiful. And I like movies. I watch DVDs recentiy, because I don't have money and my town does't have a Movie theater. What don't you like insects and capterpillars.
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